Cloud Realism Attempt failed

Sheezyart Definition, a bit outdated XD
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This is my first attempt to try to do a realismish coloring job, as you can see I pretty much failed

Jpeging made the image a bit messed up, I'll problbly switch to a png later.
You know what sucks, is when you realize much more errors on a piece once you upload it X_X

Haha I guess there are realistic qualities, but its eh, its alright in that sense, but I think I like how it turned out :3

Sometime last week I did his hair, and yesterday I did the draft of coloring th skin on his arm and face, and today I finished it, and did the clothes as well.
I also made his hair more yellowish (top pic) The bottom one was the way I did it before I made the tint more yellowish

Here's the original Sketch:[link]

If you compare the both you can see I made a lot of majorish changes to his face, and left Aerith out I also included his other arm since I ran out of room on the paper drawing